Thank you for your interest in Knowhere! We appreciate your application. However, the mods would like clarification and revisions on the following:
(1) While you do a good job of explaining the world of Teen Wolf, we'd like clarification on how Stiles fits into that world. What is his relationship to the supernatural elements of Beacon Hills? What sort of influence does he have in this world? (2) Additionally, we feel as though Stiles' personality as presented reads as many different parts-- each section seems a bit disjointed, and it's difficult to read them as a whole. Please edit this section to be more cohesive.
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Thank you for your interest in Knowhere! We appreciate your application. However, the mods would like clarification and revisions on the following:
(1) While you do a good job of explaining the world of Teen Wolf, we'd like clarification on how Stiles fits into that world. What is his relationship to the supernatural elements of Beacon Hills? What sort of influence does he have in this world?
(2) Additionally, we feel as though Stiles' personality as presented reads as many different parts-- each section seems a bit disjointed, and it's difficult to read them as a whole. Please edit this section to be more cohesive.
Please post these revisions as a comment in response to this one. You have 3 days to complete these revisions, but should you need an extension or additional clarification please feel free to let us know.